TOK Essay Feedback: What Good Feedback Should Actually Catch
Useful TOK feedback should not only say that a paragraph is weak. It should explain whether the problem is title focus, example choice, missing counterclaim, shallow AOK analysis, or lack of evaluation.
Fast first pass: paste one paragraph into the GPT and ask for examiner-style feedback with revision moves.
Ask feedback to check these five things
- Does the paragraph answer the prescribed title?
- Is the knowledge claim clear?
- Does the example support the claim, or just illustrate the topic?
- Is there a meaningful counterclaim or limitation?
- Does the paragraph end with an implication about knowledge?
Best prompt to use
Paste your paragraph and ask:
Diagnose this TOK paragraph. Tell me whether it is descriptive, analytical, or evaluative. Then identify the weakest sentence and give three revision moves without rewriting the whole essay for me.
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Fast AI feedback will not replace your teacher, but it can help you arrive with a clearer draft and better questions.
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