# TOK Essay Feedback: What Good Feedback Should Actually Catch

TOK essay feedback guidance for title focus, claims, counterclaims, AOKs, examples, and evaluation.

- Live GPT: https://chatgpt.com/g/g-fOitKYU60
- HTML page: https://tok-ib-theory-of-knowledge-gpt.vercel.app/guides/tok-essay-feedback.html

## Core Idea

Useful TOK feedback should not only say that a paragraph is weak. It should explain whether the problem is title focus, example choice, missing counterclaim, shallow AOK analysis, or lack of evaluation.

## Five Checks

1. Does the paragraph answer the prescribed title?
2. Is the knowledge claim clear?
3. Does the example support the claim, or just illustrate the topic?
4. Is there a meaningful counterclaim or limitation?
5. Does the paragraph end with an implication about knowledge?

## Best Prompt To Use

Paste your paragraph and ask:

> Diagnose this TOK paragraph. Tell me whether it is descriptive, analytical, or evaluative. Then identify the weakest sentence and give three revision moves without rewriting the whole essay for me.

## Positioning

Fast AI feedback will not replace your teacher, but it can help you arrive with a clearer draft and better questions.